Please Help
By: Hana
Elleonora
Park Hyatt Apartment, Hickson Rd, Sydney, March, 14th 2000 –
08:28 am
Sunny day in the beginning of spring at Edward’s apartment
[funny music played –
sound of bird’s tweet]
[music fading to silent
after message received ringtone played, Edward immediately opens and replies
the message]
[From:MOM, SENT= 14-03-2000 08:28am
Edward, do not forget
this evening we’ll have a fine dining at our favourite Italian restaurant]
[message sent ringtone
played]
[From:EDWARD, SENT= 14-03-2000 08:28am
Of course mom, how can
I forget my lovely parent’s momentous occasion for their 20th wedding
anniversary?]
[message received
ringtone played, Edward immediately opens and replies the message]
[From:MOM, SENT= 14-03-2000 08:29am
Good then. I want to
see your best look in this formal occasion, so you have to had your best suit
on]
[message sent ringtone
played]
[From:EDWARD, SENT= 14-03-2000 08:29am
Will do, mom]
***
05:33 pm
[Edward is
straightening his tie, preparing for his best suit]
[frightening music
played – fading from silent]
[message received
ringtone played, Edward immediately opens the message]
[From:MOM, SENT= 14-03-2000 05:33pm
[a jumble of numbers
and letters, but through the vocabulary stew it could make out one legible
phrase]
[“Please help me”]
[lighting darken]
[Edward shocked and worried–
staring at his phone for a second then reply]
[From:EDWARD, SENT= 14-03-2000 05:34pm
[Are you okay?]
[message received
ringtone played, Edward immediately opens the message]
[From:MOM, SENT= 14-03-2000 05:34pm
Oops. Pocket text!]
[music end]
[lighting brighten]
EDWARD: [sighed with all the relief he had and
continued to prepare himself]
05:36 pm
[frightening music
played – fading from silent]
[message received
ringtone played, Edward immediately opens the message]
[From:DAD, SENT= 14-03-2000 05:34pm
[a massive mixture of
letters and numbers, with the phrase]
[“Please help me”]
[From:EDWARD, SENT= 14-03-2000 05:34pm
[Edward’s dad was
always a joker, so Edward presumed his dad was just joking around – continue
reply text message]
[Oops. Pocket text!]
[music end]
[frightening music
played – fading from silent]
[Exactly half a minute
passed when Edward received the exact same two messages from his sister]
[From:EMILY, SENT= 14-03-2000 05:34pm
[a massive mixture of
letters and numbers, with the phrase]
[“Please help me”]
[music louder]
EDWARD: [sparked panic] This could not be
coincidental. It just couldn’t
[frightening music still
on]
[In a state of sheer
anxiety, Edward started to run to the restaurant. He made it about a quarter of
the way before he was stopped by a police officer]
Cunningham St, Haymarket, Sydney 05:50pm
[music fading— end]
POLICE OFFICER: Main
road’s closed – Huge car crash
06:15 pm
EDWARD: [horrified to see the lifeless corpses of
his mother, father and sister] Please tell me the estimated time of their
deaths
POLICE OFFICER: All
three of them were killed instantly by the collision, at 5:32.
EDWARD: [Shocked, instantly check his inbox and just
realized it was a minute before the very first text]
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