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Wednesday, April 13, 2016

[Mid-term] Annisa Dewi Nugrahani - Intransitive (Poem)


I walk through the path,
but I cannot find you.
I walk through the path,
but I cannot see you.


Is that you?
The man standing behind the blue?
Is that you?
The one I see in the afternoon at two?


I still walk through my path,
and live my own life
Still with myself.
Still without you.

Intransitive..



Midterm Test - Poem
-  Nugrahani -

1 comment:

  1. I can enjoy your three stanzas, but you really make me surprised with the word 'intransitive' in the end, as this term commonly used in the sentence building block. Maybe you mean that 'your life is incomplete', yet I suggest you to find another term instead of 'intransitive'.

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