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Sunday, March 20, 2016

The Responsible Goldilocks and The Kind Hearted Three Bears


The Responsible Goldilocks and the Kind Hearted Three Bears
by Jeni Nurmawati

Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Goldilocks. She went for a walk in the forest. Pretty soon, she came upon a house. She knocked and, when no one answered, she walked right in.
At the table in the kitchen, there were three bowls of porridge. Goldilocks was hungry. She tasted the porridge from the first bowl.
"This porridge is bitter!" she exclaimed.
So, she tasted the porridge from the second bowl.
"This porridge is too spicy," she said
So, she tasted the last bowl of porridge.
"Ah, this porridge is just right, but I need two more porridges" she said happily and she ate it too. When she was going to eat the porridge from first bowl and second bowl, she thought that the porridge was too bitter, and the one is too spicy, so she sought for some salt and water in the kitchen. It was hard for her to search it, so she made the kitchen untidy until she found the salt for the first bowl and water for the second bowl of porridge.
After she'd eaten all it up the three bears' breakfasts, she was really full. She was feeling a little tired and walked into the living room where she saw three chairs. Goldilocks sat in the first chair to rest her feet. 
"This chair is really old-fashioned!" she exclaimed.
So she sat in the second chair.
"Now this chair is too girly, it’s boring..." she whined.
So she tried the last and smallest chair.
"Ah, the style of this chair is just right, but it doesn’t fit my hip. I think I need some touch" she sighed. But just as she settled down into the chair to rest, it broke into pieces!
Goldilocks was very tired by this time, so she went upstairs to the bedroom. She lay down in the first bed, but it was really smelly. Then she lay in the second bed, but it was too aromatic and it bothered her nose. Then she lay down in the third bed and it was just right. Goldilocks fell asleep.
As she was sleeping, the three bears came home.
"Someone's been eating my porridge," growled the Papa bear.
"Someone's been eating my porridge," said the Mama bear.
"Someone's been eating my porridge and they ate it all up!" cried the Baby bear.
"Someone's been sitting in my chair," growled the Papa bear.
"Someone's been sitting in my chair," said the Mama bear.
"Someone's been sitting in my chair and they've broken it all to pieces," cried the Baby bear.
They decided to look around some more and when they got upstairs to the bedroom, Papa bear growled, "Someone's been sleeping in my bed,"
"Someone's been sleeping in my bed, too" said the Mama bear
"Someone's been sleeping in my bed and she's still there!" exclaimed Baby bear.
Just then, Goldilocks woke up and saw the three bears.  She screamed, "Forgive me" And she approached them into their knees begged for pardon. The three bears forgave her with some deals.
“I’ll forgive you if you fix all the mistakes that you’ve done. I want you to make us the porridge with the same taste like before for each of us,” growled the Papa bear.
“I want you fix my little chair!” shouted the baby bear.
“And, I want you to clean our beds and make it to the same condition like before,” said the Mama bear.
Then the Goldilocks do their wishes and the three bears felt happy yet touched. While the Goldilocks was busy doing the task, Mama Bear made once more porridge for her, Papa bear made a new chair and bed for her too, and the Baby bear kept watching her do the task.
After she finished her tasks, they welcomed the Goldilocks to eat together with her own porridge, after that sit together and watching TV in the living room with her own chair, and sleep together in one room with her own bed. Goldilocks was very happy and thanked them. The three bears asked her for coming back to their house anytime she wants.
And when she returned home, she had a thought that one day she will come to their house again.

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