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Thursday, March 3, 2016

Alpaca and The Girl

Alpaca and The Girl
by Jeni Nurmawati

Feets trapped on the dancing ground
Smile shown as the fascinating clown
Ponytail glide with the gay head up and down
Magic bubble she is within it, for the fetus of sound

But the sun was starting to hide
The fetus she flash dimmed when comes the night
All roses faded through the grotesque sight
Touch the deep shore of heart and hold her tight

The sky is gloomy yet the lightning thrill
The girl pierced by thorns, tossed by the wind swirl
Like the solar system Alpaca is the real
The girl deceived, desire to annihilate what is real

Alpaca stronger than the poor girl loving better
Losing the air with the eyes full with the line of glares
The girl slay not take any care
Alpaca perish with the haunting stare

2 comments:

  1. Brilliant. But I think if you didn't explain the meaning of this poem it'd be hard for people to understand it, try to use more simpler dictions

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  2. I love every single poem in this blog. The poems really depict who you are. Congratz guys! Let's explore the world of imagination and sense more..!!

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